first cat wasn't bad overall nice shit... hmm Its a little too obvious that he took more then one take... and if he din't then he must of silenced taking his breath or something... but anyways nice looks pretty good lyrics


beat is tight aswell

Lady Fiya... yeah you need to up your breath-control so do try recording without a cold the spitting was nice you got some potential, try spitting a lil more clear, more on beat... and if you can cop some better quality

good looks for both yall

peace

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