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Old 02-16-05, 06:27 PM   #22
TonyTone
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From: Maryland
This was feedback posted for oreo

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Kordazr get ya head cracked from behind, ill ask you how it feel
Only time your lyrics exercise a mind is putting the brian on a treadmill
......decent coulda been alot better, kinda played too though
Rap like r kelly having sex,mainly its only the youngins you fucking
Daffy is the best choice for you avy, cuz with out 20 posts you duckin*
.....nope
Oreo listens but only hears good rap coming from your local radio tuner
Zip up ya grades cuz its like you got your fathers name, ya forever a junior**
......nice, make ur entire verse this good
Already squashing this emcce face it man your not a fearce opponent
Read a math book cuz ya rhyming abilty multiply's zero as an exponent***
......ok closer




Zekes Professional Masturbator Iss His Work Occupation..
Located In Merktown Cincanatti Where He's That Onli Population..
....ummm, no
He Stinks,On Tha Verge Of Bien Extinct Like Bison..
Uses His "Head" Tha Most Out Of His Crew Of Wisemen..
.......ditto
Zeke And Oreo 2 Pussies In Love Who Host Dykes..
Left Kester Dead Along Time Ago,So Thass Why Oreo Ask Him Ta Ghost Write..
still no
Brotha Who "Acts"A "Sista" Quit Singin Like Whoopi...
During 3 Somes His Tha Creme In Tha Middle Like His Selftitled Cookie..
......good concept, needs better wording

ummm.....its kinda sad cuz lookin at his post count you'd think kordozar was a vet but sorry but ya not, be more creative, the personals were there but the punch didnt hit all that hard
oreo had a pretty decent verse but im kinda surprised that i didnt see too much nameplay by kordozar with a name like oreo, lmao.......good concepts, punches hit pretty hard
so yea, he gets my vote

vote-oreo, damn i wish i realized before i left all this feed that i needed 650 posts to vote
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