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Old 02-16-05, 06:38 PM   #10
Magic5
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP

.MictoriouS.
structure isnt very good.. almost all of your lines were stretched.. flow fell off due to the stretchness.. you had good multis.. wordplay was decent enough.. a few, at best, of your punches connected.. no good personals..

SQUAD-UP
structure is good.. flow is on target.. you had a few multis.. wordplay was pretty dope.. some of your punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
.Mictorious. had the more multis.. both had pretty good wordplay.. neither had good personals.. SQUAD-UP had the better structure.. flow.. he also had more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. SQUAD-UP gets my vote..

VOTE - SQUAD-UP