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Old 02-16-05, 06:50 PM   #11
.Ike.
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Voted For: .MictoriouS.

Mictorious......
[i]Kid get Slashed-Wit-Incisions; Let Me Lay This 'Hoe Down' Like Country-Dance-Traditions
Cuz Mic Leave a 'Squad Up' in Smoke Faster than AirCraft-Collisions..!!
nice opener here...set up was dope...punch was dope....8/10

He Stays In The Back-Of-My-Hand, My Flow Shootin Clips And Make Him Tap-Dance..
I'll Have People Sayin 'Squad Down' Like A Shot Up Army-Clan..!! Ouch
decent......hit pretty well...7/10

Lay You To Rest So U Can Rep-The-Floor, Yes Listen To My Dirty-Metaphores.
Wrecked-N-Gored, Ill Have His "Right Side Intact" So All Whats Left-Is-Scorned..!!
nice...hit pretty well....7/10

overall................22/30

Squad up..................
a win for you? nah he'll try to buy those scores
u Houston nigga, we dont see"eye to eye" no more
nice.....hit pretty well....7/10

son u not grippin it
and ya punches like Powerball, u have very little chance of hittin it
ehh decent.....5/10

casket or pot, it doesnt matter when u rot
u got leftover punches, they get used after they was hot
decent....5/10

i astound when i spit, look down on ya clique
this shortsighted rapper, gotta look around for a hit
decent....5/10

its funny how ill thoughts, thought he was ill
but if his thoughts was so ill, he would've thought of some skill
wasnt feelin this.....3/10

im sorry but my deal's important
n u couldnt buy an A for that verse if u was on Wheel of fortune......EAsssssy
ehh...ok....4/10

overall......29/60

ok this goes to mictorious...because his punches were more creative...his structure was better....his set up lines were a lot better....Squad up...work on your set ups and structure more....you have a lot of potential....i just thought this went to mic...his verse was more creative.......MICTORIOUS....PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR......link in sig.....thanks
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