Voted For: Technical

Check Bee...Test Me?...And You'll Lack Vital Body Parts Like Organ Donors...
I Wanted To Farther You...But I Just Found Out Kester Already "Owned Ya"...
Went Through Your Background...Thought You Was Asian Till I Flipped The Page N'...
I Saw The Information...That This "Killer" Was Part Of A Crew That's Caucasion...

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Killer Bee, you need to work on your concepts and punches. You didn't have any hard hitting punches that were directed at your opponent. Your structure and flow is off, you should probably work on that before even worrying about creativity and punches. Also, work on your wording.. keep writing though.


Technical, your verse was decent. There wasn't anything that really stood out as being great, but you had a couple of personals which I quoted. Your flow and structure was solid and consistent, and you had a couple alright concepts. Overall, you just came a lot harder and cleaner in this battle than your opponent did.


v/ Technical