it was ight...tha structure was kinda wack, cause yo lines were stretched, but overall, it was aight to me. i just thought it couldve been a lil better, u lacked good/creative wordplay, and yo rhymes were kinda simple, but u can really elevate, and i think if that was an audio, it wouldve been even better. i should put that on a track,and keep eleVATEin...


hold it down for SAC family...this is tha best place ever

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