Voted For: Technical

KillerBee
ight yo i wasent getting where you were trying to go with your punches they sound so grade 1, add some bigger words in there and deffin the flow and it might sound a lil better and damn the stucture was mad off and the flow fell just sometimes not to much but no hate i just damn you need work..pz

Technical
yo that was better then the last battle i seen like the stucture is alot better here and the flow is alot better the vocab is still at a decent range not so bad and the punchlines were just killer dope, theres nothign i would change about your verse

Opener: Technical
Closer: Technical
vocab: technical
stucture: technical
flow: technical
punchlines: Technical
win: Technical