View Single Post
Old 02-17-05, 11:37 AM   #32
..Decree..
The Rulers Back
 
..Decree..'s Avatar
 
Posts: 4,496
From: Queens,NY
IP:

Voted For: SPuL

my vote is SPuL.

Tech, your verse was real hard to real. I mean seriously shorten yo lines man. No hate, but work on that. That shit fucked up yo structure soo badly. But the lines I caught were aiight. But try hittin' him wit harder personals and hard punches. Shit works nice. But what you did was aiight though. Not bad verse, but stretched lines fucked up yo flow and structure. But it was aiight try. Come harder next time.

SPuL, damn, it's like you did this shit quick cuz this ain't your usual shit man. But it was still nice. Vocab was basic as fuck. But yo punches you had some nice ones. That closer was ill linking back to this battle sayin' it was gonna be his loss. I liked that shit. And the opener gettin' on about the ghosting. Shit was tight wit the punches. You easily got that. Only thing you didn't beat him in was the vocabv.

Honestly I think SPuL killed this guy. I'd be amazed if he got even one vote, no hate, it just looks like a KO to me. but both keep elevating.

Vote=SPuL
__________________
O.wning Y.ou D.aily

Y.ou Know My Style 20 Niggas Wit 40 Cals

Send a message via AIM to ..Decree..