if yaw need more explination

IE: as i said earlier, you say "like" way too much, and the tetris thing ive seen many times in the past. and the wordplay is either played (like "burn ya fist") or pulled off poorly ("tear-a-ris). all paraplegic shit was played on 01, it just gets annoying ot see now. nameplay was nice, best bar of ya whole thing and the closer was so-so

TROOP: the first bar looked like you tried to hard to rhyme.." simplify reflects"??? does that shit even make sense? i like the fact that you can use multis correctly, same amount of syllables, they rhyme more then 2 syllables, makes ya shit flow a lot better. the egg cartons thing is borderline played... the ghandi line was forced but at least youy aint sayin "like" for every one of your metas. closer was nice, had good imagry and the punch worked good, nothin played about it

vote = troop

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