Topic hasn't been handled many times before so was nice to read for a change. Approached it in a very personal and emotional way, liked how the story progressed. Found good balance with your vocab, flow was good.

Beginning was nice with the whole diary thing, conversation in between added extra dimension to the story. The best part of the whole piece was the ending, the whole message behind those last lines...damn, raw emotion...

black feild worker says,"i guess we will never be free"
2nd black feild worker says,"maybe one of us just did"
^whoa...deep shit...

Dope drop baby...

DQ

__________________