yo quality ain't bad bro, atleast I could listen to this track haha... aight
flow was pretty cool, and voice was cool you got some potential, I think that if you brought some more micpresence the performance would of been alot more sick... like ill for sure dawg, so work on that, it would be worth re-recording in the futur, and lyrical content is looking good
if you get the chance return that favor and critisize aight:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177309
Draxe
peace