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Old 02-17-05, 04:28 PM   #35
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Voted For: C-Bo

pretty solid battle....id say

C-bo....nice drop, i dunno bout the opener though, that probs be your worst line, but overall, good job. second bar, clever, hit em with both lines, liked the second one. everything flowed nicely, structure, little incosistant at places, but worked, maybe just upp the vocab, thats it.....finisher was solid, hit hard, worked well with the rest of your verse....punches came hard, same with the personals....all in all, you came harder than log and you dominated this match, good job

Log....fairly decent, lotta played shit but keep elevatin an you should be fine....had the multis in there, they worked....flow and structure were consistant....vocab a little plain....finisher was solid, i liked it.....but i think c-bo is alot above you and it showed, you didnt really come that hard and he ate you up....but you got some potential, just keep at it....good battle

v/C-bo
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