Beat at the intro is horrible but becomes pretty good after it finally gets going. Lyrics are on, flow is solid. Needs some cadence. Sounds liek you recorded this 2 bars at a time. The line you say "shhhh...just open your mind" some echo on "mind" woulda added some much needed ambience to this track. This flow reminds me of Dre's flow when Korrupt was ghosting for him. The portion of the rhyme where you mention something about grinding fine bones is VERY much like "Tephlon" who is nice as hell. If you can get a hold of some of his tracks (usually works with MOP) listen to him and see how he uses his vocal range.

Second verse is much like the first as far as lyrics. Has a pseudo-morbid concept to it which worked out okay. I think more cadence woulda killed it. Kinda reminds me of a calm Jus Allah.

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