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Old 02-17-05, 09:41 PM   #2
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nos=not your best but it was intriging non the less....
nice take on the topic, pretty original concept...ya vocab n
imagery was very different from what im used to readin but
it was a good difference...lol...nice work...8.5/10
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hells fire=i wasnt feeling the intro, but i liked alot of individual lines you had n thought ya concept was aight.....not the impacting closer i was expecting...ya flow fell off in some areas n i found some parts highly repetitive n without meaning..but overall it was aight..7/10
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!