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Voted For: Buck.Shot
Buck.Shot
Alright Nice Verse Kid, You Cam Hard With Some Punches In Here Most Was Creatively Done, You Had Well Vocabulary In Here, But On The Other Hand Some Was Basic, Your Structure Could Use Some Work Here, Try To Line Up The Bars So That They Are Even Or Almost Even As Possible, Also Could Add Some Multi's Here It'll Do Your Verse Better In One Hand, Meta's Wasn't Really Here You Can Improve On That Category Other Then That....8/10
.K.onflickz
Wow, This Is The Worse I Saw From You So Far, I Mean Your Structure Was Absolutely Chaotic, Your Vocabulary Was A Two Year Olds Book, Your Punches Wasn't Even There, Damn Coz What Happen???, You Had No Decent Meta's In This Verse, Your WHole Flow Was Off, Your Structure Was The Worse Part Of It, You Had Multi's In Here Which Is The Only Category You Would Of Won, But Other Then That, Your Punches Was Soft Hitting And Your Personals Wasn't Hitting To Hard......Over All 7/10
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