wow, im am shocked, i hate troop and he did really good.. daz, yours was alright because i liked the vocabulary but that was about it, it had no rhythm at all and just i thought that you would do better, and premanition, you just tried to pack to much vocab in like the first 4 lines, it was just terrible, you tried to make it all complex but it made it look stupid, so work on that, but i think troop did really good in this one..

v- troop.

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