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Old 02-18-05, 04:03 PM   #7
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Voted For: morse code

solid drop by both....

morse code.....nice spit man, i was feeling it, not really your finisher though, wording wasnt really that good, but rest of your verse i thought was well played.....structure, coulda been better in some places....for the most part, your flow was consistent and was easy to read....vocab, maybe up that a little but you verse was good enough....punches and personals, thought they hit harder than blitz', maybe coulda worded some a bit better for more effectiveness (ie....3rd and 4th bar, probly the weakest part of your verse).....but overall, you stayed consistent with your punches, a few hit real nice...like the puberty one haha, and the bar just before it.....solid verse man

blitz.....for the most part, your verse was kinda hard to follow...alot of forced lines and multies made it really choppy and threw of the flow and structure, so work on that.....your personals and punches, most of them didnt really come off that great, you had alot of potential on your punches/personals, but poor wording and limited vocab really drowned them out....if you really work on it though, i think you could be a solid rapper, but this just wasnt your battle man, better luck next time.....

v/morse code for harder punches/personals, complexity, vocab....everthing
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