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Old 02-18-05, 06:44 PM   #8
xRell-i-Ventx
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ight your flow could be better u kinda off beat....lines are ok..delivery is ok emotion is aight u stretchin out lines wow..i dont like this (no hate)...are these text cats u dissin? anyway props on work keep at it
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