Strongest aspect of your piece is the emotion and I honestly don't think you paid too much attention to the other things but that wasn't necessary. Found a good balance with your vocab, kept it easy to read but not too simple. Had your flow on lock and structure was cool. But that emotion...so raw and pure, loved how you expressed the pain back then and the pain you still have because of it now...must be hard to finally write it all down and confront yourself with it but you did an excellent job with this drop!

Tight piece!

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