Bad quality homie, you need to get a better mic cause we have no way to tell if you got any skills withn tha voice... flow wasn't really that good homie, you need to work on this ... try memorising the lyrics you are gonna be spitting and concentrate on the performance instead of reading it and getting it down...I went thrue the same dawg... it will come along

just my 2 cents aight


return tha crits plz:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177309


peace

DraXe