The Beat is looking nice ... nicely done on the production etheir you did it or not...
hmm the flow ain't bad at all the flow was nice... you do need to work on some breathcontroll, delivery and articulation of everything you spit needs to be worked on... instead of that nice looks all around it wasn't bad, bring your potential to the mic bro
return tha favor aight;
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177309
peace
DraXe
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