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Old 02-18-05, 09:20 PM   #13
Acuity
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blaze: average drop...nuttin special..fix your structure..lines were stretched man...up vocab..some gd personals and concepts and aight punches..u showed some creativity and didnt comewid wack played ass lines and punches..-7/10

supamann: ur entire verse did not have 1 original bar,line or concept, everything has been done b4 and on a regular basis...u need to work on your creativity and concepts..find your own style, u feel me...u had no personals and u need thses to eliminate suspicons of pre-writin and biting...up ur game, keep battlin

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