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Old 02-18-05, 10:27 PM   #44
J. Dubya
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Voted For: Black Queen

He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts
good opener, punch landed
This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements
Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students
uh, pretty decent punch
Like atheists there’s no faith for ya.. prayers wont save you from this loss
Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross'
good
U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe
But since u dont go out, i never worried bout u always in my shadows
nah, don’t like this punch
Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips
& u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with
pretty good closer here

Overall you had a good drop, punches were on point,
Structure was good, and the flow was on point also



ima exspose ya wait dis hoe's a fake just check da bar's!....
2 get "rid of black queen" i aint gota "throw away a deck of cards"
good punch
dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz
u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"
nope, not feelin this one
she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak.....
believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week"
pretty decent punch line here
yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"
good here, punch was on point
u oughta write flows..cuzz mj yeah i slaughter trife hoe's!....
nice? u even saught a..in rap u'll "neva c me" im saught of like "strobe"
closer was aight here

Overall you had a good drop too, structure was okay here,
The punches were pretty decent all thru, and the flow was
Okay here too

But to me I think that Black Queen took this one by a hair
Though, punches seemed harder hitting and they landed
But good drop to both of you…no hate to both…