Voted For: Limited Edition

ok this is a topical not a poem battle indepths shit is poetry not rap it dont rhyme most of it flow is way way off which hurts it as well imagery is pretty decnent but some shit just slacked and wasnt descriptive enough for me here vocab was good but the non rhyming and no flow really hurt you indepth and you need to be more descriptive its like you jump around too much sun 4/10
limited edition good very good descrition of shit here i could see the story flow and struture good rhymed nicely also good vocab and really nice imagery got you this sun good flow also helped 7/10

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