Alright well since im poet of 2004 i figured i'd help some kids out by votin on they shit...

C.A.L.I- Your ish was good man... the imagery was good and your emotion was strong... The way that you portrayed the imagery it painted a vivid picture in my mind and it was really working... this piece drew me in from the very start... solid piece man... 8.6/10

TR.OOP- Your stuff was okay,... i wasnt really feelin the structure it threw off the flow but this is poetry so the structure isnt really the biggest deal.. your emotion was good... but you could work on it with some points and build it up to make it apeal more to the readers and everything... the imagery was good but that also lacked... not that bad a piece... kinda seems like you just startin on this/... 7.4/10