Flyweight
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IP:
Damn, some of those lines were pretty amazing... real deep from both of you. I thought that TROOP had a more consistent structure and rhyme scheme whereas the meter in CALI's verses wasn't always on point. However, it gave it a sort of off center, chaotic beat which works well with the subject matter. I thought the imagery was great in both but CALI engaged the senses more, his lines were more vivid and carried more urgency. I like the whole background setting TROOP set up, gave the piece more depth and involvement but overall I'd say I enjoyed CALI's drop more. Once again, great battle guys!
v/ CALI
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