Voted For: Premanition

Premanition

Just Tryner Be ‘Ill’, Man You Must Be ‘Sick’ Of Ur ‘Health’…
No Matter Wot I Say, You Just Can’t Get A Grip Of Yourself…(Sand)
^nice opener,good wordplay with his name and such, 1st line a bit played

Sayin You Skilled? But Elbows All You Bringin To The Table…
Rapper? Im ‘Shocked’, U Only ‘Live’ Wen Bathing Wiv A Cable…
^good bar

Big Hotshot From Rb, Gonna Beat Me? You And What Army…
I’ll Leave You More Sliced & Diced Than Bark On A Palm Tree…
^not real punch,bit self-glorification but good wordplay

Dialect Seeked A Vet, That U Bout To Regret But Thx 4 Da Props…(*)
Only Thing I Look For In Ur Verse Is The Significant Full ‘Stops’.’…(**)
^hehe,dope ending for sure,funny stuff

Cool battle, found good balance with your vocab, had your flow on lock and the structure was cool. Nice punches and some personals,here and there bit played or self-glorification but overall pretty creative stuff. Liking the wordplay, solid drop!


Karmabarz

Prem, really I could slow down & slice you.
....But your too far behind me.
............So I gotta basically snipe you.
^okay opener but lacking creativity,no real punch in fact

Prem ya should of foreseen, This battle’s over your head..
First mistake you made was registering…
…………........Second was dropping ya verse in this thread..
^nice one,been used before but still good punch

Forecast I wouldn't check in..there goe’s chance’s of victory.
But you could refer to me as a prostitute, the way I'm makin this quick-&-free.
^refer to you as a prostitute?not feeling this one

Punches precise, but yours, always miss.
I told this fag I’ll close this deal….
…………& he moved in for the kiss.
^hehe,good closer

Had some good punches here and there,no real personals and some of them were mad played. Overall lacked some creativity and nice wordplay but your vocab was okay, flow was good and structure was cool. Just get more hardhitting things next time and try to be more creative...no hate...please return the favor...

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