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Voted For: TheWackestMC
damn, one of the bst battles ive seen in a while on here,nah mean.
ok here we go,
invektive's opener -was ok kind of corny but good diss
invektive's closer -ok personal, but it kind of doesnt work when dudes name is alread thewackestmc, nah mean
invektive's bes bar- all of your writtens go unread....like neglected books...stay on the shelf
he even admits he's not good ....but honestly he's still overrating himself
invektive's worst bar- kids the weakest ive witnessed...and still needs an hour to drop 6 lines
after this loss....he'll have to "Rebound" better than "Rodman's Prime"
lol could;ve used a better metaphor for rebounding, that was not a hot one dog.
so basically, u had some ok bars some wack ones n some good ones. good vocab n structure, but some bars sounded kind of forced,nah mean.
ok thewackestmc
TWMC's opener- good wordplay, hit pretty hard , nice set-up
TWMC's closer- again good word play, coudl've had a lot better set up tho, still hit kinda hard
TWMC's best bar- u aint got a corporal clutch, maybe u grippin it spiritually
give him viagra for his verbs, cuz u impotent lyrically
^^^that shit was hot, good vocab n set up
TWMC's worst bar- n nicca u dont see the green
u musta "lost ya mind" like they sent u to the guillotine
^^^wasn't feelin that too much, didnt really punch that hard if u feel me
basically twmc's had them punches, nah mean. invektive's verse was kinda labored or somethin, this was close,reaaaaal close. twmc had no personals really so that hurt him alot but invektives werent that great either
invektive didnt have no multies and twmc did.
invektive had good structure, but that dont get many points in battle, esp since i could read both easily.
so ima givin this to TWMC. HOLLA BACK AT ME...1.
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