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Old 02-19-05, 06:21 PM   #33
The Black Plague
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Voted For: J DOT

Imma have to give this vote to Jdot... Close battle tho

Kon-Nice opener, liked it but after that you kinda fell off... Didn't understand the adams apple line...I liked the Cows line, shit was nice.. The Hova line was played, set up was off i seen it comin, and the Grover line was wack... Ya closer was nice, liked it hit pretty hard...Overall ya punches wasn't too hard, decent personals... Good struc adn a good flow, just didnt come too hard wit the punches.. decent verse tho

JDot- Nice verse here... Opener was nice, good line... 2nd line wasn't good, bad wordplay.. THe Rip Line was nice, and the Christian shit was nice.. prolly ya best line... The ape line was aiite, kinda EThuggish... Elephant line was nice too, but ya last 2 bars was wack... 4 clips line wasn't good, and ya closer was jus wack didn't make sense... Overally you coulda came harder wit punches, but they was still better than his.. personals was good, and ya struc and flow was on target...

Overall- J Dot takes it wit better punches and personals.. Kon you were inconsistent throughout, and u can use more complexity... JDot you started out real nice, but ya last 4 lines was wack.. still you had enough to be Kon jus with better personals, so you get my vote...

V/J Dot
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