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Old 02-19-05, 10:46 PM   #1
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hmm alright k the stucture was amd ugly putting ~~~ in there just wreaks the stucture and your flow was weak also the vocab was decent but still weak your punches werent hitting i just aint feeling them you gotta do somethign to give them flavour add some more funny clips n it will be funny and dope. no hate

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i liked that ncie stucture the flow was more then great your punches just hit they were nice and funny just thought you had the better hitting punches soem nice vocab at most parts of it the creativty was just soemthing i couldnt even think of nice verse pretty one sided to. pz

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