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Old 02-19-05, 11:56 PM   #9
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Beat/Production:
Aight..beat was pretty hot. Nice choice for a battle diss.

Lyrics:
The lyrics weren't decent, I liked how you were spitting the punches, instead of these other cats talkin about using gats in battle verses. Nice.

Flow:
Flow was good, basic ryhme scheme, but you know what that suits you and doesn't sound bad. Decent.

Delivery:
Delivery wasn't bad, seemed a lil laid back in all...but I laughed at the line about the pussy feedback line. The second verse had a little more delievery to it though.

Quality:
Quality wasn't too bad, but you sound like your echoing really bad. Makes you sound like your rapping in a hallway, neways...kinda affects the sound, but not bad.

Overall:
Overall this was a good battle track, the lyrics for this track were good and was a relief from all them fake thugz who spit about gangster shit instead of metaphors and linquistics when fucking up an emcee lyrically. 8/10


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