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L.E
From: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada |
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Voted For: Parallel
Haha...one sided...
Parallel...you didnt even have to come as hard as this. You could have went a lil less...but dope verse, very nice flow and structure, vocab was a little bit basic, but oh well...nice story to the topic, not really much else to say...you got this for a doper imagery, and a nice flow and structure.
Dio...a'ight I am guessin this is your first topical...not bad I guess, but you need to up everythin...incorporate some imagery into your verses, flow was off, vocab was basic as hell...you have to unleash it though. No hate.
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