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Old 02-20-05, 12:19 AM   #13
Parallel
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L.E
yo you surprised me the flow was very good the stucture was also very good but you lacked emotion in some parts you did have lots but just not as much as Deph did but you had a good imagery and vocab very good part the only thing you came weak on was emotion pretty much and a bit imagery but not bad its decent, no hate

Indeph:
whoa man you surprised me your style is killer the imagery and emotion you have is just unbeleiveable the vocab was decent at most parts the picture you made was very good the story you told was very different something i couldnt come up with cuz i try and write stuff that relates to me but this must have been relating to you some how i guess..

Opener: LE
closer: Indeph
imagery: Indeph
vocab: tie
stucture: tie
flow: LE (sense he rhymed)
Emotion: Indeph

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