Beat - I always loved this beat. T-boz and Da Brat killed this. The vocals in your first verse are about 2-3dB's too loud. I'd turn the inensity on the reverb down a bit too. Flow got lumpy in some spots. The deliv is EXACTLY like pac's circa 1989. Just mostly shouting and no real variance in it which is a shame. The lyrics were on point but the deliv was 2Dimensional through the whole track. The last line finished off flow too man which is a big no-no. It's not a bad track by any means, but I've heard better from you and EXPECT better. Rapped yourself into a corner now. Better deliver straight A's or everything else will soudn like a C. This would be a C IMHO. Think you owe it to your self to re-record it and fix that flow, turn the levels down a little or at the least turn the levels down on the existing vocals - but I'd still opt to re-record if I were in your shoes.

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