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Old 02-20-05, 10:30 AM   #11
Adam
 
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Dio Deus definately had the stronger verse in this collab. It had better structure and better flow to. But through-out both of your verses it seems like you guys are trying to hard to make rhymes. That kind of threw the flow off... TheWackestMC you should extend your lines a few more words....but other than that good drop boys...7/10

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...664#post1971664

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