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Old 02-20-05, 04:03 PM   #5
TearZ oF BlaQ
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boring wasnt enough for u?... i was tryin to be nice ...

first off u started bout 32 lines with I .. which made reading ur shit very irritating u rambled on n on thru 3 stretched verses ... ur shit was way to wordy .. an wasnt even filled with discriptive imagery .. reading this was very borings .. this would be one of those 5 minute tracks prolly with boring lyrics .. learn to write to attract not to scare off readers ... asshole... now return the favor since i kno u saw my joint there an jus decided to up this boring shit
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