Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: Skriptz
LyricalFlowz
hmm not bad i seen some ncie lines at most parts but you didnt really use any metas to complete your personals well i didnt see them maybe if you did try making it more obvious cause you probably used hard words that didnt quite work but other den the lack of metas the verse was not that bad the rest was ight
no hate
Skriptz
i liked the way you used lots of metaphores in there and created tight punches with a few personals but there wasnt much comedy in there but it wasnt bad the stucture was decent and the flow was great but what most stood out were the punches probably peace
opener: skriptz
closer: lyrical
punches: skriptz
personals: skriptz
stucture: tie
flow: tie
vote/ Skriptz
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