Banned: Cheating
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IP:
not bad the stucture is weak but thats cause of your writing on pen n papper i bet if you would of wrote on the comp it woulda been better but still its not bad like you gotta get usto papper n shit so keep doin it the emotion was good the flow was alright the vocab was good so just the stucture but i dont care cuz you wrote on papper but its decent
keep practicing
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