Thread: Os1ris vs xcell
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Old 02-20-05, 06:05 PM   #19
Lord.Wun
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Voted For: Os1ris

dayum this shit was decent...you have potential to be talented...only thing is...the // at the end of your verse...get rid of that..and try changin font to "arial" and centerin your shit....then you'd get more rezpekt...but you have dope Punches fam..shit was dope

xcell your shit was below average...the flow and structure was WIZACk as fuck.......dawg...you need to up your game on the realz....one

vote: os
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