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Old 02-20-05, 07:18 PM   #18
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Voted For: Skriptz

gotta go with skriptz

lyricalflowz....alot of played shit in there, like your closer, the 'bigger than you line', boxing gloves one.... weak pucnhes too...like the tool shed one and even the opener was a little dull....overall, not bad of a spit, but you need to come out harder against he's skriptz, more creativity and complexity, better thought out lines....flow didnt go so smoothly throughout your verse...and you could up the vocab a little

skriptz....took this one all the way, little sloppy on the flow i thought near the start, but thats about it, nice punches, opener and the ash tray ones were the best....so overall: better punches, couple harder personals and complexity...

v/skriptz
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