Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

Weak battle

Mista:
OK you had wordplay..but you rhymed with
only one sound.Which ruined the rhyming,but you
used all personals which you seem to be consistant with.
nice structure,but I don't give two fucks about that.

U.S.
You had no wordplay really.
Just insluts,but you had meta's I'll give you that.
Fx your rhyme scheme and be more complex.
Add some personals in too.

Vote/mista

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