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Old 02-21-05, 02:15 PM   #11
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Voted For: Showstopper

ok let's break this down,

Invektive, flow was pretty nice and structure too. But punches didn't hit that hard at ALL. Your only good one was the closer, and that was just decent. Also, using links is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo played out now. Plus, if you use them actually make them hit hard instead of somethin' pointless like a call out thread. But other than that, I guess it was an aiight verse.

Showstopper, your verse was aiight too. First punch was pretty nice. second punch pretty ill wordplay there. I was fdeelin' that. 3rd punch was weak, nothing special. Closer was nice. Jus work on yo flow. Other than that, pretty nice stuff.

I think this was a weak battle, but show stopper easily got this. Should be easy win for him IMO.

vote/ Showstopper

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