Shit was iiiiiiight. Aight word play vango, sweet like Mango, man-go, ya delivery could be worked on alot. Sound like you was takeing mad breathes, smooth it out or stay consistent on every word. Like Tremendous said, nice at first then its like you lost it at the end...over all not bad for a diss always enjoy listening to beef. Stay up....
Keyz.....coming soon...to an auido near you...

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