This isnt a bad track. Beat is nice the pianos sound crisp. Work on your flow and delivery...and the key message your trying to send, cause like fux i didnt get it niether. I think those 3 improvments will have you doing nice work. Stay up and keep droping, one

Keyz...coming soon..to an audio near you....

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