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Voted For: Class.Sic
Class
Alright You Had A Decent Verse, I See Alot Of Personals in Here Some Good And Some Alright, Vocabulary Was Nice, One Thing Is Your Structure Needs Work, You Had Some Decent Punches Here, Some Multi's Not To Much But SOme Was There, Towards The Eding It Got Better, Which I Find Good But It Usualy Starts Of Good Ends Bad, Anyway, You Had A Nice Flow I'll Give This Verse A 9/10
J Dot
Alright You Had An Alright Structure But You Had Whack Vocabulary Some Basic Ish, You Need To Change That, Also You Need To Put Meta's In Here, Coz Your Killing Your Own Flow, It Wasn't All That For Serious, It Was Decent Though,
Personals You Didn't Have To Much Of It Which Ate Your Flow, Also Your Punches I Didn't Feel Hard, I Feel Like I Heard This Before but I'm Not Sure, Anyways You Get An 8.2/10
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