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Old 02-21-05, 04:28 PM   #4
Dirty Nigga
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Aight man...

This is somthin diffrent once again...
So it need a diffrent type of feed, but on the rhyming side of things, the flow lacked in some lines, but in others it was decnt as hell, the vocabulary was there, an you tried sending a message, an i think you should have achieved that, i'm not a strong believer in religion, but the things your rhyming about, are very strong points for a debate, an i'm sure once people who know more about this religon stuff read this peice, there will be much too talk about

But on the whole, it was a decent drop, meaningful, the message you tried sending out i think will get thru too alot of people, an it was enjoyable too read

Dope shit, stay up dogg

Good lookin out

Peace
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