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Old 02-21-05, 06:22 PM   #8
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP

squad up took this. wit better flow and punches

This fool call himself Squad Up...he must be a lame!!//
A wanna be Lil Wayne...hes tha rappin Martin payne..//
+ehh not good for an opener, wasnt feelin it+

Imma disgard of his frame..an leave with no description//
Hes not convincin..he just a rat that jumped ship..go ask Pro-Vision..//
+this was ok nahmean, but could've hit harder+

Watchin EMPIRE is tha closest you ever been ta a Uzzy//
Talkin bout clips..if you seen 1..cuz it was a prreview ta movie//
+pretty good diss, nothin special here tho+

ur gangster shananagins dont move me...So I keep screamin who's next?//
Im like tha bullets in a chamber... I bring heat ta his Tec's(text)//
+ya best bar right there^^, that was hot+

Fag ur career is over soon as tha words drop..//
Imma tell everybody that dick stays on ur mind like Mary from 3rd Rock!!//
+another good bar, pretty hot too+

So I dont know why you even wanna battle me..//
cuz ur flows r like a misdemeanor ...mine is like Assault n Battery!!!
+closer was ok,b ut its been done before so not many points there+

ok now im gettin lazy...
squad ups opener=
chea, eh fam take it like a man, just smile and lose
ya juvenile rhymes, get beat like its child abuse
+good diss, n creativity+
squad-ups closer=
u goin down in flames, u might as well spit it n burn
cuz ya verbs lack viscosity, ya just dont stick to ya words..
squad-up's best bar=
when referrin ya name, i heard u was a wack herb in the game
this dumby so stupid he put the password in his name!
squad-ups worst bar=
u appeal to men hoes, wit ya still dead flows
Codesteel n them, got ill heads?... NOO!!!
ight so squads gettin this one, no hate pretty hot battle
holla back at me
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