Voted For: ColdSTEEL

Breakdown...

Name:Cold Steel

Verse:
This fool call himself Squad Up...he must be a lame!!//
A wanna be Lil Wayne...hes tha rappin Martin payne..//
Imma disgard of his frame..an leave with no description//
Hes not convincin..he just a rat that jumped ship..go ask Pro-Vision..//
Watchin EMPIRE is tha closest you ever been ta a Uzzy//
Talkin bout clips..if you seen 1..cuz it was a prreview ta movie//
ur gangster shananagins dont move me...So I keep screamin who's next?//
Im like tha bullets in a chamber... I bring heat ta his Tec's(text)//
My punches hit hard,I knocked this clone dizzy//
My spit is crack...While he tha rappin.. Tyrone Bigsbee//
Fag ur career is over soon as tha words drop..//
Imma tell everybody that dick stays on ur mind like Mary from 3rd Rock!!//
So I dont know why you even wanna battle me..//
cuz ur flows r like a misdemeanor ...mine is like Assault n Battery!!!

Need/Don’t need to work on:wassup C....um overall you just need to work on your structure, keep droppin them you can only get better...

Stats:
Punches:610
Metaphors:4/10
Wordplay:3/10
Structure:4/10
Personals:5/10
Multies:5/10
Total:25/60

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Name:SQUAD-UP

Verse:
chea, eh fam take it like a man, just smile and lose
ya juvenile rhymes, get beat like its child abuse
u couldnt'shine wit mop gloss,all that lip get ya top lost
and ya flow couldnt even get kick, wit hotsauce
u still get knocked off dawg
cuz my soldja guns, put a holein one nigga like golf balls
man,,.. im lettin you and these fakers get it
that im bout to put an L on ya head liike its alakers fitted
u mighta been makin moves, but u slowin up prolly
nicca think he hard, cuz he saw Grownin Up Gotti
u appeal to men hoes, wit ya still dead flows
Codesteel n them, got ill heads?... NOO!!!
when referrin ya name, i heard u was a wack herb in the game
this dumby so stupid he put the password in his name!
yo i make ya chick scream, n fuck ya sister like inbreeds
but in this league , i'll make ya lip bleed when my punches go blitzkrieg
this fool act so gay, ....whAT? u dont say
CODESTEEL like hockey this year, ...gettin no play
if u nice,... than i'll b damnded forreal
just cuz u got super man Pj's dont make u the man of STEEL
u goin down in flames, u might as well spit it n burn
cuz ya verbs lack viscosity, ya just dont stick to ya words.....eassssy

Need/Don’t need to work on:wassup with you squad...anyways...you need to work on making punches connect ya feel...keep workin at it.

Stats:
Punches:4/10
Metaphors:3/10
Wordplay:4/10
Structure:5/10
Personals:4/10
Multies:2/10
Total:22/60


Close battle fam but im gonna have to say that Cold Steel takes it...just by a little...

RTF in the sig against J DOT...personally felt like i won....4 people also feel like i won...hopefully you do too...

oh and its 3-1 im up..pz..

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