ok - typing as I listen now:

Vol on vocals gotta come up like 2-3dB. 1-syl flow that I always hated. Rhymescheme switches up every once in a while which kept me awake. The beat's Ok. Was never real hot on it but it works well enough. Your deliv is the same on EVERY bar which is what made this so dry to me. Eh, a little let down personally. You guys are coming at each other real soft. Guess this proves it cars. We just won't see eye-to-eye on a track, lol. Sorry.

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