Voted For: Epic

Normal Punches-Traumatic, nice punches. Some creative ish in there, but some not. Masturbation? You are better then that. life, not that great punches. Unoriginal and not that strong.

Personal Punches-Life, you had em, but not that good ones. Traumatic, try some more personals.

Metaphors- Traumatic, less of them, but better. Life, pringles? Damn.

Multiple Rhymes-Neither

Structure-Traumatic, better structure, but not by much, Keep working on it man. Life, lotta stretched lines and ish.

Flow-Decent flow, punches kept it going. Life, decent flow, fell off sometimes.

Word Play-Nice wordplay, LIFE was good, but try to avoid other MC's names. Life, not a lot of wordplay. Work on having more wordplay and wittier at that.

Traumatic, not bad man. Punches were nice, but you need to try some personals.

Life, ok verse. Try some better punches, word play, and personals.

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v/Traumatic

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